tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5105169001740479425.post578540833816386821..comments2024-03-02T17:15:07.750+00:00Comments on Vixie's stories: A Poem a Day (56): Too slow to flowvickiejohnstonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15947507866512596346noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5105169001740479425.post-37748460180388598322016-04-27T10:57:57.007+01:002016-04-27T10:57:57.007+01:00Thanks, Stacie. Cheers for reading. Really appreci...Thanks, Stacie. Cheers for reading. Really appreciate you stopping by and your comments. Have a great day :)vickiejohnstonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15947507866512596346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5105169001740479425.post-30069295260293898232016-04-26T17:31:42.582+01:002016-04-26T17:31:42.582+01:00Vickie - The rhythm in this poem flows fast, like ...Vickie - The rhythm in this poem flows fast, like the rushing water you describe - I particularly enjoyed the last lines "I am this echo of breath...Disappearing upon the air...Lost on the ocean's wave." Beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Stacie Eirichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13889951415294858821noreply@blogger.com