Saturday 14 November 2020

A Poem a Day (300): The hare


 
                               He knows 
                    the chase is on,                        feels the switch-out
        in the air, tempo change                          from something tepid.           
        It’s time to run,                                             but he’s done,
            the hedgerows smother                                 him down,
        leg bleeding out,                                            blood a full pump                  
    in his veins, his chest,                                   his ears. He senses
        them close in,                                                 waiting, rain spilling
    in a misted wreath,                                       smells this grisly                  
    stench of man                                                making its heavy                  
        footed trudge.                                                 Twigs snap    
            in circles rounding,                                        leaves fold in
                on themselves.                                     Crunched underfoot,
                           nature aches                         in silence,
                        roots peeled,     sunk back.                                    
Whiskers twitch,
eyes alert, limbs prepare to bolt
from this blood pool.
Minutes hang like days
til they depart empty handed.
Hunched in the downpour
shielding him, smothering his musk,
the hare licks his leg,
flesh scabbing.
He will not limp out
til morning wakes,
eyelids heavy, whole body
shaking.
 
 
 
Copyright Vickie Johnstone, November 14, 2020

2 comments:

  1. <3 Love it - especially the word picture - very nice. The words give rise to a real picture of a moment in his life and the shape you make with the words looks like a rabbit and his ears but also the movements he makes as he darts about this way and that - great job <3

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    1. Thanks so much for your comment, Laura. Thank god it actually looks like a bunny! That's cool you picked up on movement - I hadn't tried to show that, so that's great you felt it. It's fun making pictures out of words. I haven't done it very often :)

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