Day
13 of the NaPoWriMo challenge at www.napowrimo.net.
Finally,
here’s our prompt for the day (optional, as always). Donald Justice’s poem, There
is a gold light in certain old paintings, plays with both art and music,
and uses an interesting and (as far as I know) self-invented form. His six-line
stanzas use lines of 12 syllables, and while they don’t use rhyme, they
repeat end words. Specifically, the second and fourth line of each stanza
repeat an end word or syllable; the fifth and sixth lines also repeat their
end-word or syllable. Today, we challenge you to write a poem that uses
Justice’s invented form.
a
casing for limbs, aghast lines, they cannot yield.
Carved
triangular forms, shadows play in them all,
never
done, never final. Motion cannot yield.
The devil has no care here, chases lions
ever still.
In the end it’s just two silhouettes
standing still.
into
the morning sun’s glare, wishing for a dove,
peacemaker
in this time of marital non-bliss.
His
wife has left, three hours ahead of this dove.
He examines the emptiness of her
footprints,
asks whether this argument will outlast these prints.
muscles
yielding, bones shielding, patterns in echo.
We
slide like waters, parting, only to return
to
our bedmate, fellow artiste in night’s echo.
We mould each other, face the undeniable
glitch
in ourselves that tells us we’ve
truly arrived, full-glitch.
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