Sunday 15 March 2015

A Poem a Day 2015 (38): The smell of sour

Another one written for JD Mader's 2minutesgo Friday challenge on his blog. I took 'The smell of sour' from his first story as a prompt. Cheers :)


The smell of sour

She’d smelt it all her life,
the rusted scent
of strewn dust,
making it all melt.

This stench lifted,
curling like old paint,
wet to the touch,
bitter to taste.
It followed her
in a cloud of waste,
this reminder of old.

When it sounded,
this ancient bell,
the heady mariner
came carrying his shroud,

bereft of any knowledge
of its meaning.
In silence he drifted
into the outer realms
where the dead pound
ageless and unborn,
their endless ache.

He lies without
breath or word,
as silent as the sea
turned sour.

copyright Vickie Johnstone

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