Friday 10 April 2020

NaPoWriMo Day 10: Nine hay(na)ku poems



Hi, I’m doing NaPoWriMo on napowrimo.net. The challenge is to write a poem a day in April. For Day 10, I had a go at the hay(na)ku and wrote nine. It’s the first time I’ve heard of this form – I think I might be hooked :)


This is the prompt for the April 10 poem:
Created by the poet Eileen Tabios, the hay(na)ku is a variant on the haiku. A hay(na)ku consists of a three-line stanza, where the first line has one word, the second line has two and the third line has three. You can write just one or chain several together into a longer poem. 


1

We
Sleep in
Pockets of dreams,

Wake
Between stanzas,
Yawn our disjoint

Departing
The platform
Of fantastic things.


2

Silver
Stars slumber
Under day’s blanket.

Silencing
The moon,
The sun glares

Until
Nature’s boomerang
Resurrects the night.


3

We
Run ragged,
Chasing our tails

In
Circles of
Our own creation,

Searching
For answers,
But already found.


4

Tree
Of peridot
Stones tied down

Too
Early to
The Earth plane

Stretches
Branches up,
Clenches roots down.


5

Weedy
Seadragon drifts,
Little fins twirling.

Purple
Neon shimmer,
Long pipe searching.

Twisting,
Slow dance
Betwixt swirling seaweeds.



6

Blackbirds
Call in
The morning – notes

Rippling,
Soaring free
On the air.

Red
Robin lets
Loose warbling riposte.


7

Time
Stalls, flickering,
The movie stuck.

Film
Unravels, stasis,
A life unlived.

Actors
Cast silent
Have no words.


8

Cat
Rocks bottom
Chasing brown rat,

Sniffs
It out,
Delivers crushing blow.

Arranges
It neatly,
Blood pooling gently.


9

Guitar
Wakes us,
Wee-eee-eee!

930am!
Birds silenced.
Zen moment disperses.

Player
Halts. Instrument
Stuck up ass.

Copyright Vickie Johnstone, April 10, 2020


2 comments:

  1. I like them, Vickie, especially 2 & 3. You are very talented!

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    1. Thanks, Greta :) My faves are 1 and 2. And I've always had a thing about sea dragons !

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