Hi, I’m doing NaPoWriMo on napowrimo.net. The challenge is to write a poem a day in April. For Day 10, I had a go at the hay(na)ku and wrote nine. It’s the first time I’ve heard of this form – I think I might be hooked :)
This is the prompt for the April 10 poem:
Created by the poet Eileen Tabios, the hay(na)ku
is a variant on the haiku. A hay(na)ku consists of a three-line stanza, where
the first line has one word, the second line has two and the third line has
three. You can write just one or chain several together into a longer poem.
1
We
Sleep in
Pockets of
dreams,
Wake
Between stanzas,
Yawn our
disjoint
Departing
The platform
Of fantastic
things.
2
Silver
Stars slumber
Under day’s blanket.
Silencing
The moon,
The sun glares
Until
Nature’s boomerang
Resurrects the night.
Nature’s boomerang
Resurrects the night.
3
We
Run ragged,
Chasing our
tails
In
Circles of
Our own
creation,
Searching
For answers,
But already found.
4
Tree
Of peridot
Stones
tied down
Too
Early to
The Earth
plane
Stretches
Branches
up,
Clenches
roots down.
5
Weedy
Seadragon
drifts,
Little fins
twirling.
Purple
Neon
shimmer,
Long pipe
searching.
Twisting,
Slow dance
Betwixt swirling
seaweeds.
6
Blackbirds
Call in
The morning – notes
Rippling,
Soaring free
On the air.
Red
Robin lets
Loose warbling riposte.
7
Time
Stalls, flickering,
The movie stuck.
Film
Unravels, stasis,
A life unlived.
Actors
Cast silent
Have no words.
Have no words.
8
Cat
Rocks
bottom
Chasing
brown rat,
Sniffs
It out,
Delivers
crushing blow.
Arranges
It neatly,
Blood pooling
gently.
9
Guitar
Wakes us,
Wee-eee-eee!
930am!
Birds
silenced.
Zen moment
disperses.
Player
Halts. Instrument
Stuck up
ass.
Copyright Vickie Johnstone, April 10, 2020
Copyright Vickie Johnstone, April 10, 2020
I like them, Vickie, especially 2 & 3. You are very talented!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Greta :) My faves are 1 and 2. And I've always had a thing about sea dragons !
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